Comments on: Cut Your Grocery Bill – Ten Money Saving Grocery http://www.freestuffresort.com/cut-your-grocery-bill-ten-money-saving-grocery.html An online resort for freebies and free stuff lovers. Wed, 21 Sep 2011 02:17:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: khan1975 http://www.freestuffresort.com/cut-your-grocery-bill-ten-money-saving-grocery.html/comment-page-1#comment-373 khan1975 Thu, 25 Jun 2009 15:31:43 +0000 http://www.freestuffresort.com/?p=2700#comment-373 saving money and time is very good habit. saving money and time is very good habit.

]]> By: Paul http://www.freestuffresort.com/cut-your-grocery-bill-ten-money-saving-grocery.html/comment-page-1#comment-372 Paul Thu, 25 Jun 2009 14:47:38 +0000 http://www.freestuffresort.com/?p=2700#comment-372 The tone of voice used is very impersonal rather than direct, and probably a lot more wordy than required. Example "To ensure good and quality food one should make way to good grocery shops and avoid the ones that supply unhygienic and not a very good quality food." Better: "Go to good grocery shops and avoid the ones that supply poor quality food." You should then give examples of what makes a grocery good versus bad, and what goods are good versus poor quality. Otherwise these generalizations don't help. The tone of voice used is very impersonal rather than direct, and probably a lot more wordy than required.

Example “To ensure good and quality food one should make way to good grocery shops and avoid the ones that supply unhygienic and not a very good quality food.”

Better: “Go to good grocery shops and avoid the ones that supply poor quality food.”

You should then give examples of what makes a grocery good versus bad, and what goods are good versus poor quality. Otherwise these generalizations don’t help.

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